LIFE WOTHOUT LOVE

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  • Lost Love

    LIFE WOTHOUT LOVE
    IN THE LAST FEW MONTHS, YOU'VE SHOWED ME MANY THINGS
    HOW LOVE REALLY WORKS
    ALL THE PAIN THAT IT BRINGS
    LEANING IN LOVE
    YOU HAVE A FEW GOOD CRIES
    AND AFTER ALL TEARS
    YOU HAVE A FEW GOOD BYES!
    WAITING FOR THIS PAIN TO SLOWLY FADE AWAY
    BUT ALSO KEEPING IN MIND
    IT'S MORE TO LIFE THAN JUS TODAY
    AND THE LAST THING THAT I CAN THINK OF
    LOFE'S NOT THAT IMPORTANT IF WE DON'T HAVE LOVE

    XSIGN'D & SEAL'D [P][R][A][D][A]

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    hdmac commented on LIFE WOTHOUT LOVE

    06-05-2009

    Using the BOLD text makes it look ike you are shouting. A few spelling mistakes. 'wothout' and 'lof'e's'.
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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