Life till Last...

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Life till Last...

The belief of our Love..
Broken......although..
The truth bites my heart
"She will never come" I know..
Still doesn't stops my wait..
For you dear... I bow...

Even now anyone that comes in front...
I feel your presence in them at the full extent..
Can never I forget you my dear..
May be you are far or still near...

This world of Love is full, but still I am alone..
Living with all our memories happy & sour
Though you are my Dream
Which I can never reach..
Still I live in my Dream...trying to reach..

Days with You was like a light..
Of my life that showed the Way..
This the black hour ever since you left...
Breathes in this separation as long as I live..

Heart still needs your beat
Mind still thinks about your dreams
Hands cross waiting for your feels

"Life till Last..lives only for You....Till Last.."

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mdpoetgirl commented on Life till Last...

08-24-2012

Beautiful sentiment of a great love lost... the pain you feel is tangible through your words. It gets better with time... blessings to you ;-)

jademelissa74 commented on Life till Last...

02-02-2010

This is indeed a very nice piece. I love the passion and dedication that you show through your words. A great write indeed.

Joeboy

02/02/2010

thanks jademelissa......i still miss her alot..though i know that i cant have her anymore...

wheelsal commented on Life till Last...

02-02-2010

Have the essence of poetry on this site improved since I was last on here. This is great. A couple of notes: V1, line5, did you mean stop (stops)? V2 this has twisted words L2, & L3. V2, L2, do you want was? Also not complete sentences in this Verse. Not sure I got everything, but this is a beautiful poem. Try fixing these things and you will have a winner.

Joeboy

02/02/2010

thanks mate...while typing from my diary, i made this V2 (L2 & L3)..i will redo them again...

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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