Life Is Beautiful

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    Inspired by two GREAT songs... :)

    Life Is Beautiful

     Open your eyes,
    See that life is beautiful!
    Will you swear to me
    No one will cry at my funeral?

    I see you there
    Hiding the scars on your arms
    All I want to know is
    Why do you do such harm?

    Open your eyes,
    See that life is beautiful!
    Will you swear to me
    No one will cry at my funeral?

    I know that life is hard,
    But just hold onto it
    I know you want to let go,
    But please, DON'T DO IT!

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    GenUWinePoet commented on Life Is Beautiful

    04-14-2011

    poetry is great therapy... great job. keep writing.
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    ShadowEyes

    04/14/2011

    that it is :)

    MootPoint commented on Life Is Beautiful

    04-06-2011

    Yes, Don't do it. Please read my Behind the Words. :)
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    ccslim commented on Life Is Beautiful

    04-01-2011

    Ok I like this for it rolled though grand but ahahaha them dang buts! I felt with the great start but the ending didn't cure or help me understand why should I stop. Wonderful subject by far but in my heart I feel the need for more depth to why. Sorry me silly but my heart always speaks before fingers! .
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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