Life is a B**** & so is Death

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    Life is a B**** & so is Death

    Alot of people talk like they're not afraid of death. But that's only how it appears to their peers and the rest. See I can smell fear, I can hear it in your chest.... I can see it in your steps...
    Tell me... what are you going to do when death appears on your step and grip you around the neck? When the only thing you can do is veer out of breath, trying to cheer out for help. But death doesn't even steal you, it gives you a breath, a breath that refills your respect and send chills down your neck, now you live to regret you ever tied up with death. Better open your eyes for a sec. And realise with respect you are alive with deffects but could have died with regrets and that life is real and so is death. Now its probally something you will never forgete. Because life is but death its self.... just dressed in a dress. Oh yes! life's a B****

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    Chaos128 commented on Life is a B**** & so is Death

    04-01-2010

    Deep thoughts, brother! Reminds me of that line from "Gladiator": "When Death smiles at you, the only thing you can do is smile back".

    heavensdaughter commented on Life is a B**** & so is Death

    02-19-2010

    good write, some people feel that way, as were i feel death, is yet another beging, thre is nothing to fear, but fear its self and u gotta let go to anything that opresses u =) good job

    DeepEclipse commented on Life is a B**** & so is Death

    12-15-2009

    Rhyme was so fluid, coming back around every other word. Yeah you recognize death is true you tend to live more. When it comes I hope it comes quick. Ha. But death has no mercy. It will come as it pleases. Enjoyed the journey.

    1990lh commented on Life is a B**** & so is Death

    07-18-2009

    yeah life can be a bitch sometime, have 2 live life to da fullest r u will have regrets. check out my poem life is my ememy and my friend

    BLASTHEME commented on Life is a B**** & so is Death

    05-30-2009

    U said something in this piece that is very true and relevant to life, as we see/think it, and that is "death gives you a breath" and "life is but death..dressed in a dress" very expressive of the fact that we are born dying in one aspect. There are parallels in our existence that we only have assumptions/ guesses/ inconclusive intuitions on as, so in you covering this topic, I think you have hit a very valid point in living life to its fullest and enjoying and respecting what we have. 10 from

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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