Just A Shell

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Composed during my final dream of early morning; but written shortly thereafter.

Just A Shell

I found a shell upon the shore,

With no one in it anymore;

No trace of former living creature;

Nor a glimpse of former features.

 

Smooth, yet hard, by touch--my fingers;

No warmth inside, then, ever lingers.

Age determined by external changes,

As youth succumbed to rearranges.

 

Perhaps kind words, evoked in passing,

Were trusted to such winds, not lasting;

And those whose tears so selfish keep;

Returned to safe, in life, their deep.

 

Such understand the terms left here;

Where memories replace the fear;

As shells embrace the timed decay;

And only love won’t wash away.

 

Nor torrid churning, daily tides;

Are weak to harm such soft insides;

Scars disfigure the external shell;

I would contend this, just as well.

 

Return you now, from my cupped hand;

To take your place among the sand;

Trust, that you are finally free;

As all of us--will come to be.

 

Then waves did reach with nurt’ring arms;

To draw this shell from any harm;

Returning to such times of mirth—

To home, to peace, await rebirth.

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jademelissa74 commented on Just A Shell

08-13-2009

This is a lovely, well-written poem. The imagery is brilliant and very touching. Amazing write and great read for me.!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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