judge me on my death

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    judge me on my death
    Judge me on my death that's all I'm asking right now
    and listen to these words that forever i shall vow
    you said you love me like life should be
    and i believe because you're the only one that i see
    but how was that you just left me
    telling others you are doing this for me...

    for me you are lying
    'coz i know we can make it in many ways
    you were just afraid to face the challenge of everyday
    and what i have heard that it was my fault
    i know i gave everything, everything i hold...

    now listen to my last words
    before my last breath
    forever i shall love you
    and now judge me on my death...

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    creonis’s Poems (16)

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    Blame it on me 0 11/18/2008
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    Hero's Death 0 11/18/2008
    When i die 1 11/18/2008
    REWIND 1 11/18/2008
    If Love won’t love 1 11/18/2008
    Dhylan’s Cry 1 11/18/2008
    Beauty and the Beast 0 11/18/2008
    If I Go Back 0 11/18/2008
    Autumn in my heart 3 11/18/2008
    Few Floors Down 0 11/18/2008
    Black Symphony 0 11/18/2008
    The Demon’s Vengeance 1 11/18/2008
    Demon 0 11/18/2008
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