joy's song

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    i have been writing for a while but i have just recently(i say recently but in all actuality it was about a year ago)picked up the guitar and learned the basic chords and this is what came out. i have not the money nor the technological know how to record it however, so you cant hear the music. this is my first post so i hope you like it. i may post more depending on the response i get from the first couple, but, i assure you there is more to come.........for now.

    joy's song

     all my life i have tried to be
    the man i was meant to be
    although it may seem
    i have fallen short, well thats just me
    yes i've fallen short, but thats just me

    (refrain)
    this song is for the one i love
    joy's song, joy's song
    my angel sent from above
    joy's song, this is joy's song

    though i was, ok with me
    something was still missing
    so i searched the land for what wasn't there
    thats when you appeared
    i say, thats when you appeared

    (refrain)

    now that me and you are we
    together we will always be
    but, if ever we should part
    know i loved you with all my heart
    please, know i loved you with all my heart

    (refrain)

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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