IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

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    IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

    Taking my time,
        Moving too fast.

    Inside the past,
       I'm taken back.

    When did it start?
       Where do I begin?

    If and when I try,
       to myself fix...

    Take your time,
       Dont move too fast.

    Dont lose your way,
       Stay on the path.

    Dangers close.
       It's on your back.

    It's not if...It's when,
       That it attacks.

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    tynise1014 commented on IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

    08-20-2010

    That was good. I liked it. It was different. You just have to expand your writing skills, but only alittle bit. Keep writing:) -ty
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    scrye commented on IT'S NOT IF...IT'S WHEN

    07-24-2009

    Alot spoken with such a short amount of words. I liked it i hope you post more. Good luck on your books and congradulations.
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    DarrellV

    07/25/2009

    Thanx a lot, i'll be posting more soon...Thanx 4 coming by !

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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