Is This A Dream?

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    Is This A Dream?
    As our lips meet in a passionte kiss
    I felt my knees beging to shake
    my heart skipped a beat

    For a brief moment our eyes meet and
    what i saw warmed my heart

    Is this a dream?

    As the air became brisk our soul
    became one as our bodys move together
    to the beat of our hearts

    Gentle sounds of extacy fill the room

    Is this a dream?

    If this is a dream PLEASE DON'T WAKE ME!!

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    MJG956 commented on Is This A Dream?

    05-31-2010

    Here is your poem with all the corrections,I believe. Great romantic poem though! Is This A Dream? As our lips met in a passionate kiss I felt my knees beginning to shake my heart skipped a beat For a brief moment our eyes met and what I saw,warmed my heart... Is this a dream? As the air became brisk our two souls became one,as our bodies moved together to the beat of our hearts Gentle sounds of ecstasy filled the room Is this a dream? If this is a dream?, PLEASE DON'T WAKE ME!!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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