Invisible.

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    Invisible.

    Am I invisible to you?
    I thought you would notice me..
    You stare at me as if I was a blank sheet of paper you refuse to write on..
    And when you walk pass me,
    It's like i'm nothing bust a Gust Of Wind
    I listen to your voice
    And no words come out...
    But do you see me?
    No, you don't.
    Until you do, I shall remain INVISIBLE

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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Invisible.

    11-23-2010

    Great job expressing the need to be seen by others. I love the wording and the flow in this one. Great write............E

    ImpressOfLyfe

    11/24/2010

    Thank you

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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