Inside

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I'm not crazy but a lot of my life is spent thinking about the one thing that is for sure and inevitable Death.

Inside

If life ceased today would I be missed.

I'm not morbid I'm a realist.

For tomorrows never promised and today's already gone away.

Caught in the middle of a shiffting day.

Don't want to go, but forever I cant stay.

Will I go up above the clouds, or will my soul stay where I lay.

Want to live to see a hundread.

Die before I'm 30 this I dread.

These are the images that keep me awake in bed.

Gun shots, and accident turning my dreams red.

To go insane, just take a walk through my head.

Find the thoughts that I think.

In to eternal psychosis you'll sink.

but whatever the thought just keep on pushing it back.

Until mental instability my brain lacks.

Try to think about liven life by the hour.

But in a world of disappointment and death how can I not be sour.

So I stay to my self and try to stay quit.

Cause deep inside I want to riot.

But push it back continue to live, continue to hide it. 

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cliftondurant commented on Inside

09-02-2009

the unknown it make us wonder live life and enjoy because we don't know what tommorrow will bring

am2anangel commented on Inside

08-31-2009

very well done, so many unknowns. We never can tell where life will take us. Your style is much like my own, which makes me partial to your work. lol! Great job again I like ths one too.

Ravoya commented on Inside

08-31-2009

nice, i like it. keep up with the writing cause ur actually really good

rougepriest commented on Inside

08-28-2009

wow nicely done I`d say you have a good shot at being a real poet if this is a rookie work your very good at heart

FreedomFromFear commented on Inside

08-28-2009

This was really good:) Especially the first few lines. Great job!

joeskeet

08/31/2009

Thanks for saying that. Nine times out of ten I dont even know what I'm going to wright about until I do it

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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