Inside
Alone inside myself
Beneath my outer smile
Can no one fix the pain inside
Despite my calls for help
Everything continues to move around
From one thing to the next
Going quickly from day to day
Hearing nothing but my smile
Inside
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06-09-2009
- the beginning and end are strong. it falls apart at "Can...help" because yoou've lost the flow, the rythm, the music AND your 'telling' me instead of 'showing' me. sirref
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06/11/2009
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