injected with reality

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    injected with reality

    They inject venom inside me 
    and ask on a scale one to ten what is my pain
    with 3 inch needles sticking into reality
    i suddenly felt unsafe,
    thinking that this is the last breathe i take
    that i no longer will see the day awake,
    being stuck in this crazy world
    with impossible people,
    with hidden faces, 




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    jesusfreake commented on injected with reality

    11-06-2009

    nice and very astonishing the talent u showed from this poem...an awesome job so be very proud, some adults on here cannot produce a great of a poem as u have so KUDOS!

    DeepEclipse commented on injected with reality

    11-04-2009

    Crazy world........impossible people..........hidden faces....I like these truths. I'm interested to see where this goes...........

    cliftondurant commented on injected with reality

    11-03-2009

    i like what i 've read so far jazz looking forward to the finish

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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