Incomplete

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Incomplete

A thousand people

all around

tear me down.

A thousand words

I could say

but that doesn't make things okay.

If all thats left

in me

makes me cry

and my body weak

could I ever find

the strength again?

I feel the distance

when we're so close

I felt alive

and yet a ghost

and in me

crippled

my soul inside

the love comes out in every

tear I cry

but some tears stay

and do not leave

and I'm loving you

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NBParis commented on Incomplete

08-05-2011

I like how you write, straight from your heart and on to the page. Very good work. THank you for sharing this, I'm sorry you had to.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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