In My Dreams

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  • Passion

    In My Dreams
    In my dreams
    You empower my body
    Giving it everything it desires
    And leaves us both wanting more
    In my dreams
    You make your presence known
    You dominate a room
    Taking excuses from no one
    In my dreams
    You’re passionate, but rough
    Aggressive, yet gentle
    Heightens our senses
    Loving me and only me
    Until…I wake up
    To another day of
    Endless fights and disrespect
    Because when I look at you
    You are a boy
    But in my dreams
    You are a man

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    Dreamer123 commented on In My Dreams

    07-24-2009

    this is really good i like it it shows passion and love. but in your dreams. you see someone different thanks for sharing.
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    loveno1 commented on In My Dreams

    07-24-2009

    very nice poem u did a really good job with this one great write
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    shewheat46 commented on In My Dreams

    05-20-2009

    This was very good. I liked it a lot. Did you write it about someone in paticular? Poems about love and passion are enlightning to other people in confusing relationships. I have written a lot of poems about how guys have broken my heart. If you are single, I'd say stay single, but if you are happily in a relationship I would say good luck to you.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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