in anticipation of what she brings

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    in anticipation of what she brings
    In the wish of a moonday
    a blanket of cloud-white ashes lay
    quietly upon the frail legs of spring
    Awaiting the kiss of a forgotten fling

    Upon the silence of winddrops
    a tremble of evergreen tops
    fragrant the mood of soon
    Where your love and flowers shall bloom

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    Azzrella commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    09-26-2009

    Beautifully written with a nice flow it leads you to right where you need to be...
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    butterflytatts commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    07-01-2009

    im sorry it has taken me so long to get back to you it was in march when you had read mine and well i have gotten an alarming rate of feedback i do however try to get back to everyone and i have read ur poem and loved it keep the good work and words flowing it truely was a beautiful poem
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    caspiancri commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    03-13-2009

    clever wording loved it
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    beautifuldeath commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    03-01-2009

    with each new piece I read of yours I am more and more in awe of your talent.
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    KJULEST commented on in anticipation of what she brings

    02-02-2009

    Awaiting the kiss of a forgotten fling. I love that line. Let me know when you post more. Talk soon... Jules
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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