I'm Stuck

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    I'm Stuck

    I'm stuck in some shit you wouldnt understand
    Dont know where I'm going, i dont have a plan
    As i fall deeper into
    this
    Earth.
    It gets darker, people around you get colder. As if i never let things go.
    I'm baggin' it up and carrying it on my shoulder.

    Why cant I just let things go. The feelings I have inside....They dont grow, there stuck. They are on me, in me forever, at least thats how i feel. The feelings I have inside were never revealed... until now.

    My eyes will NOT drop a tear, not for you, not for them but for me, because for once I feel like Im free. Free from being hurt, free from being yours, free from being behind these closed doors, covered with lies...NOW I know why i came to realize

    You aint shit
    You didnt love me
    and i didnt love you, i was in lust
    I was stuck......
    stuck on some dumb shit
    Stuck in some shit You wouldnt understand
    Not a man

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    Sx9 commented on I'm Stuck

    04-20-2009

    work of feelings true feelings ,Not a man,but yourself,,great feel of words,,keep the faith,,walk good..

    Drivingczar commented on I'm Stuck

    04-12-2009

    Free! Nice verses! Good write!

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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