Im still Holding On but You are Fading Away

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  • Lost Love
    • JuliannK
    • "Without love we are birds with broken wings.." -Tuesdays With Morrie

    Im still Holding On but You are Fading Away
    Memories are fading

    Time stands still

    The look in your eyes gives me chills

    Raging emotions

    Hidden by a blank stare

    No telling what will come next

    Holding on to the fragements from the past

    Your eyes hold anger

    But not really hate

    Love slips away

    Making me weak

    Tomorrow maybe a new day

    But our feeling have still

    Faded away

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    dusk333 commented on Im still Holding On but You are Fading Away

    05-16-2009

    This poem was really well written and conveyed such a strong feeling! It's really good.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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