If...

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    If...

    If you could do me this
    and grant my little wish.
    Then maybe I could live
    for something more than this.
    No one really cares
    so there need be no one there.
    If there was any other way
    for me to stop this craze.
    I'd sure do it in a second
    even sooner if it'd let me.
    So if you could do me this
    and grant my little wish.
    Then this pain would go away
    and everything would be okay.

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    xxlheart commented on If...

    01-29-2009

    how sad is this...as far as a poem goes it is perfect. the format and word choice both excellent. the intent is just the stuff tears are made of. great write!!

    SAYANDSEE commented on If...

    01-13-2009

    REMEMBER THAT WHICH NEEDS BE REMERBERED, AND FORGET THAT WHICH NEEDS BE FORGOTTEN. WHEN ALL IS REMEMBERED AND FORGOTTEN, ALL IS NEW AND WELL.

    Phoenix9 commented on If...

    11-29-2008

    very good

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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