if you Think... check what you know...

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    if you Think... check what you know...



    i am  yours.
     without conditions
     the changes i make
     for you
     are
    my choices
     as is
    what
     are
    our
    choices
    i
    we
    you
     trust each
    other
    both
    better than we trust
    anyone else
    or
    any
    other
    in
    a better start
    than most
    humanity has ever
    chosen...

    Honest
    Total:
    Love
    Lust
    and Absolute
    Trust
     anything
    less
    is
    less
    than
    worthless
    dust

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    JadedJezzabel commented on if you Think... check what you know...

    10-20-2010

    this is a style of poetry that i adore......and its not so easy to do either.....this poem screams that you are going to fight for what you believe in ...in a relationship you know cannot be replaced by not fighting.........love it
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    wamomo commented on if you Think... check what you know...

    10-18-2010

    I love this!! Wow! The intensity that you put out in such brevity is just...wow! This poem says sooo much about the healthy relationship as it should be. Excellent write!
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    nightsky commented on if you Think... check what you know...

    05-24-2010

    These facts that you list are a most delightful capture of the ear, mind, and heart. Listening to it with my eyes closed, searching for the words that respond....Absolute trust......and the wonderful ( and mysterious) " a better start than most humanity has ever chosen. A better start...than humanity's ever chosen." Startling pronouncement....the thought lingers...'than humanity's ever chosen." Your poem feels like an endless path, or a bright star in the sky! :)
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    purdylox commented on if you Think... check what you know...

    04-28-2010

    the ending is great it is very good........................................
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    Alyse commented on if you Think... check what you know...

    04-23-2010

    The last section is wonderful, and absolutely true
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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