if love is really forever...

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    if love is really forever...

     fuck love
    pitiful poison
    worse than death
    release me
    i scream
    no reply
    it never replies
    silent tormentor
    smiling
    as he thrusts
    red drops fall
    they pour
    from his blade
    always stabbing
    always smiling
    inside
    i'm always crying
    such pain
    God forsaken pain
    hell behind my eyes
    the devils fire
    burnning me alive
    flesh melting
    such an awful smell
    for my nose only
    he spits in my face
    shows me what was
    takes it away again
    if i could
    i would kill him
    but i can't
    for he is me
    i am he
    she
    made it that way
    i wish
    i never fell 
    fuck love
    release me
    i plead

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    AChance commented on if love is really forever...

    08-06-2009

    Plead once, plead twice, say pretty please, and taste the life- so under nourished. spat on and forgotten, desire has flourished, and the love was rotten. I drank from the cask, of a long closed tomb. screamed with little grasped, of the blood red moon. I've cursed and prayed, for love to go a stray, and still it stayed, torn and tattered with frey. Howled at the skies in agony, sunk sullen to the depths of the sea. blinded by this blasphemy, engulfing all of me. Plead once, Plead twice, say pretty please, and taste my knife, you took the best of me, and I only took your life....
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    Sassafras1 commented on if love is really forever...

    08-06-2009

    Brings back memories of a broken heart years ago. I like your emotion.
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    jacknife commented on if love is really forever...

    08-06-2009

    very nice....it even has a nice twist...i revel in the undertone implied here and thank you for its eloquence
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    Shalaya commented on if love is really forever...

    06-09-2009

    phenomenal. i kno how u feel i culd feel the pain and anger in this poem im sorry whom ever made u feel this way did. love is not the best feeling sometimes
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    undiscovered

    06/10/2009

    thanx. im really glad you like it.

    Mrpoetry commented on if love is really forever...

    06-05-2009

    man she must have really broke your heart and shattered into a million pieces. but speaking from experience. true love comes from Jesus My Lord and Savior and He will never let you down or break your heart. also never be afraid to love again
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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