I wish I may I wish I might

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    I wish I may I wish I might

    So many promises ment to mean something
    How could I have fucked up again and turnt it into nothing
    but you know that everything I said was true
    and thats were I don't get how these words are coming from you

    you said that it was going to last forever
    && I said that i'd love you forever

    but the difference was that you broke your promise
    and I'm still upholding mine
    the difference is that your putting on a front
    but I see thru it like glass

    you said that it was going to last forever
    && I said that i'd love you forever

    and right now your pissed and i'm sitting at home crying out my heart
    pouring out my feelings to anyone who will listen
    why am I acting like a pathetic little school girl you might say?
    but are you the one that stared into the eyes of your soulmate one night but than a week later lost him over something as small as a myspace message.

    and if you are than you understand how I feel because

    You said that it was going to last forever
    && I said that i'd love you forever

    so I said I was sorry so please take away the pain.

    your the only one that can change it and make me sain
    the only one that can stop the rain......the tears that drive me insane
    the love that seems like you slain

    and maybe you said that it was going to last forever
    && maybe I said that i'd love you forever

    but put that aside and you'll see that everything he said..........
    was still true
    you'll see that everything we did
    was what made my heart move
    you'll see that no matter what
    I would have went to the end of the earth to prove
    my love.


    you said that it was going to last forever
    you said that it was going to last forever
    you said that it was going to last forever

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    lakugo commented on I wish I may I wish I might

    05-16-2009

    wow i didnt think poems could get that touching, especialy from a stranger but wow, rating arent the point but still u deserved at least a nine for this.

    PiXi3t3aRs91

    12/07/2009

    Thank you for the comment on my poem I wish I may I wish I might. what you said was really touching. thanks

    VampireRose commented on I wish I may I wish I might

    03-04-2009

    I know completely where you are coming from...

    pocketofdreams6 commented on I wish I may I wish I might

    03-03-2009

    Good luck with that situation, just look at each relationship as a learning process, opposed to life and death.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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