i will KILL u

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    i will KILL u

    i will kill u
    u kissed me
    now i must kill u
    or i have to die
    sorry bout this
    i kno u thought i liked it
    but i didnt
    i wanted to say

    GO TO HELL BITCH
    but i didnt cause
    i dont want to hurt u
    i stil want to kill u
    but as long as u
    stay away from me
    ull b ok got it?
    good

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    FadingFebruary commented on i will KILL u

    02-20-2010

    I like that you're trying to come up with unique poem ideas; it's always good to get new and different things out there. I think that the poem would be better received if it was more gramatically correct. I also think that it needs revision--every poem anybody writes should be revised! As of now it feels a little bit like rambling, but don't let all that get you down. I think it definately has potential...you just need to work on it, mmkay? :)
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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