I Want You

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    I Want You
    Taste me

    Tease me

    Let me feel your passion arise

    Enlighten me

    Teach me

    Show me desire in your eyes

    Give me

    Take me

    Let what's yours be mine

    Intoxicate me

    Enjoy me

    Let me give you the most precious gift devine

    Touch me

    Hold me

    I want to indulge in your embrace

    Kiss me

    Seduce me

    Control my body with your pace

    Taste me

    Tease me

    I need to feel your greatness

    Feel me

    Let me

    I want to create what's in your likeness

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    TheSadman1 commented on I Want You

    07-07-2009

    Oh wow, to have this in real life would be so cool.
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    EbonyQueen48 commented on I Want You

    03-26-2009

    You used creativity with this piece, great pom
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    mindless commented on I Want You

    03-24-2009

    good work.check out mine
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    inpursuitof commented on I Want You

    03-04-2009

    Incredibly expressive, u are very nice.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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