I Want To Thank You

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    I Want To Thank You

    I want to thank you for the joy that you give
    I want to thank you for being so positive
    I want to thank you you’ve made me touch the sky
    I want to thank you for always standing nearby

    Lessons learn my true experience
    These truths I hold as self-evidence
    My love for you I’ll testify
    Without your love I’d surely die
    I want to thank you for bringing back my sunshine
    Even though you are no longer mine
    Thanks to you for being there through the strife
    I really thank you for being the joy in my life

    I want to thank you I cannot ever deny
    I want to thank you with you I’ve learned how to fly
    I want to thank you you’ve kept my brown eyes dry
    I want to thank you on you I can always rely

    You have a certain kind of special appeal
    No words can express the thanks that I feel
    My time with you seem so surreal
    No alibis I need nothing to conceal
    My word is my vow I’m down on one knee
    With you till the end I will always be
    Thanking you is the least I could do
    For all the things you’ve done I do love you

    I want to thank you for always being there
    My Salome oath to you I shall declare
    I want to thank you for showing that you care
    You are second to none and no one can compare
    From a mountaintop let me exclaim
    Let the world know that I’d give you my last name
    Shout it from the hilltop that do acclaim
    Without your love my world would’ve never been the same

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    leolioness commented on I Want To Thank You

    11-28-2009

    I do admire the totally awesome expression of love and understanding. A very long poem, maybe something can be rearranged. I am very lengthy, myself. I just think that your thankfulness can be more eloquent, if shortened but not much. Just remove some of the repeated verses.I believe that when published, this is a poem that can be used by lovers, families and friends. At times I even see it as an inspirational poem.ood luck and God bless.To God be all the glory.

    kisaarjaki

    11/28/2009

    Worthy of consideration. I thank you for your comment.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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