I WANT TO SAY GOOD BYE

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    I WANT TO SAY GOOD BYE
    A MOMENT IN TIME I WAS HAPPY
    I HAVE HIM AND LIFE WAS EVEN BETTER
    I GAVE MY SELF CAUSE I LOVED HIM
    LOVED HIM OR SHOULD I SAY LUST OVER HIM
    I BEGAN TO BE FINANACIAL ABUSE
    COULDT UNDERSTAND WHY
    BUT I CONTINUE TO LET IT HAPPEN
    NIGHT AFTER NIGHT DAY AFTER DAY
    I SAW NOTHING
    I SAW LOVE TURN TO HATRED
    BUT I HATED TO SAY GOOD BYE
    SO CAN YOU HELP ME SAY GOOD BYE

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    Vincent commented on I WANT TO SAY GOOD BYE

    11-12-2008

    I was cut off, read the bottom first.-like honesty. I wrote a poem called Uconditional love and I would value your opion. Thanks Vincent
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    Vincent commented on I WANT TO SAY GOOD BYE

    11-12-2008

    I hope you want honesty about your work. I felt what you are saying in this poem, but all caps is not good and punctuation is import to get the meaning and feeling you are trying to covey across. The poem is good, it just needs some work. I hope you
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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