I have become an Animal

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    • lordmret
    • is wondering when he will find happiness

    I have become an Animal

     I was once full of life
    Now I'm full of death
    All I want is a wife
    But instead I take my last breath.

    People always hated me
    They always called me names
    I was never treated respectfuly
    They'll see when I am no longer tame

    I'll become the animal as I was such treated
    They'll wish they let me be
    I wont let what they did be repeated
    I just wanna be free

    Come and get me fuckers
    I will always welcome your threats
    I hate fucking truckers
    Come at me and try to whip me with your breasts

    All I can say
    Is that you'll be in my way
    Better run from me now
    I've become like a raging cow

    My head bowed low
    Ready to charge
    You'll get my killing blow
    I will become at large

    This is what I have become over the years
    I will never again show my fears
    I can see this psycho inside me
    I guess it's what I was meant to be

    "I HAVE BECOME AN ANIMAL"

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    ayyan commented on I have become an Animal

    03-25-2010

    The poet's insight talks much about the human life which are real and unreal. I have thr read the poem fully and I like this one
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    dumplin commented on I have become an Animal

    08-25-2009

    You seem to have a raging bull inside of you. Have you thought about a hobby that can help you vent some of that pent up anger? Maybe you can get a couple of friends to start working out with you 3 or 4 times a week. That might help. Your poem is very good, but it concerns me deeply for you. Take care of you, Dumplin'
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    lordmret

    08/25/2009

    i wish. all my friends left state when we graduated high school three years ago

    AbysmalGoddess commented on I have become an Animal

    05-26-2009

    Is it inspired by 'animal i have become' by three days grace? don't worry, a girl will come along soon. And why the hate of truckers???
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    LaLucha commented on I have become an Animal

    05-22-2009

    hmm...like a raging cow? a psycho raging cow....And, "over the years"? You are young to become psycho so soon in life! Is this about vampires at all? Fubar's poems are about teenage love...that can make one psycho, don't you think?
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    lillyrain commented on I have become an Animal

    05-22-2009

    I really like it. Its not bad at all I dont see how you could ever say it was bad at all. I think it is very creative.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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