I HATE U BECAUSE

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    I HATE U BECAUSE

    I HATE U BECAUSE
    the way the blood runs down my fourarm
    seeping out so fast
    the way you said u loved me
    but it never did last
    the way life was created and renuid
    because it didnt help my past
    the way my thoughts were reined
    because u made me so sad
    the way the sex effected me
    because u were so bad
    the way my skin crinkles
    all over this bloody rag
    the way im wrighting this poem
    because i felt so bad

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    gregster commented on I HATE U BECAUSE

    10-13-2010

    wow.....he did bad.u deserve better chica,,,,,,,,GOD BLESS YOU IN JESUS CHRIST NAME

    Devlon commented on I HATE U BECAUSE

    11-21-2008

    This is a good poem. I have felt like this a couple times before.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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