I get so weak

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  • Confusion

    I get so weak
    I lay and drown myself in worry with not one rational solution

    " I get so weak"

    I bottle my darkness inside refusing to let the light in

    "I get so weak"

    I submerge my body, soul and mind in the ocean of self pity

    "I get so weak"

    I allow doubt to creep in, snowballing into a bigger pool of sin.

    " I get so weak"

    Putting my energy into worry, darkness, self pity and doubt in my search for an unrealistic sense of synergy.

    "I get so weak, I get so weak, I get so weak...."

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    StandingBear commented on I get so weak

    05-15-2009

    Sometimes there are paths we think we can't get off of yet there is always an elusive, intersecting path that beckons escape. Great write.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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