I feel for you
Sometimes you sit there and I wish I knew what was going through your mind, but then I think twice and image all you've been through and am glad and glow for joy when I don't know but suddenly the joy drindles and I feel nothing but sorrow and I can't help but have my heart ache for you the longing to confort and the longing of love oh how I wish there was someway to take away your pain, but I can't and that's what hurts so much and I can't take it because I want to help I want you to feel ok but then I think twice and feel worse because I feel bad when you were the one that experience all the gloom all the need to break away and go away from the world and to be in solitude, peace, quite no worry zone and I wish this for you so bad and someday I hope you get to live peacefully but for now I the least I can do is give you all my loveI feel for you
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GentleT commented on I feel for you
07-02-2009
- So sympathetic and your love for this person shows in your words. I hope things gets better for your friend or family.
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sammia commented on I feel for you
07-01-2009
- This is very deep and full of emotions I didnt know if i should cry or smile. There is so much pain and love in this. good write
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Sydney commented on I feel for you
07-01-2009
- this is very powerful. really really powerful. and deep too. i like the way you make it into a circle of things
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