i can't...

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i can't...

the gun's at me lips,
cold metal against warm skin.
I think of my misery,
I think of my happiness.
the saddness rules me,and
This is the only way to end it.
The only way to end the suffering and
the lonilness.
But I still can't pull the trigger.
I can't leave my family,broken as it is.
I can't leave my life.
I can't leave my dreams.
I'm not ready to give it all up yet.....

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gjmichele77 commented on i can't...

05-09-2009

Tori...excellent job. I have been there and that is exactly how it feels. I may have messed up your rating as the system is not responding properly. gjmichele77

PawPrint commented on i can't...

03-19-2009

This is just beautiful!!!!!

Bladebearer commented on i can't...

03-18-2009

I've been there.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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