i asked
i asked god for a flower ,he gave me a buquei asked god for a faithful life ,he said ok
i asked god for a true love he gave me that too
i asked god for an angel he gave me you.....
i asked
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- lala1842005
- is now feeling good about herself
Poem Commentary
i wrtoe this poem because i now have a true love because god gave me that and i have a happy life but like every relationship has it's up's and down's we have ours but thats life you know you live and learn but i love him to deathi asked god for a faithful life ,he said ok
i asked god for a true love he gave me that too
i asked god for an angel he gave me you.....
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cmlestrade commented on i asked
08-28-2009
- Very sweet , watch spellings and capitalization minor items easily fixed. Good reading.
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