hunger
Hearts beatingTicking like a clock
Tribal rythms sounding
Hunger unknown rising
Ticking faster
Beating louder
Hunger devours and ticking stops
hunger
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Tags: Thoughts , My Feelings
Ticking like a clock
Tribal rythms sounding
Hunger unknown rising
Ticking faster
Beating louder
Hunger devours and ticking stops
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05-23-2009
- Wow I like this one too. Just keep writing please!!!!! you are really good. I really love all of your poems.
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