How can I think?

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    How can I think?
    How can I think of the Ocean
    When your murmur feels like a potion?
    How can I think of the Moon
    When it could blind me soon?
    How can I think of the Pole
    When you captured my sole?
    How can I think of the Sun
    When all the Fire begun?
    How can I think of the Air
    When I can't even inhale?
    How can I think of the Day
    When magic is here for today?
    How can I think of a Dove
    When I already have your love?

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    MrGee commented on How can I think?

    11-24-2009

    Very nice. the rhymn and meter are good. This is a very descriptive poem and paints a good picture in the mind of the reader. I especially like the final verse - How can I think of a Dove When I already have your love? without any hestitation I easiy rate this work a 10
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    cgagos

    11/24/2009

    Thank you very much for your kind rating....as for every poet, the readers' feedback are extremely important and rewarding. My best regards.

    cgagos commented on How can I think?

    03-18-2009

    I would love to have some feedback.....thank you.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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