house

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    house

    Surrounded by green grass,
    Around her playing some little children,
    Hugging me like mothers,
    Comfort me just like an old friend.
    I love you, my house


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    redbloodink commented on house

    12-07-2009

    sweet.... Much blessings to your house and your family..... Red

    Singing

    12/08/2009

    Thank you so miuch for your kind word and comments. I am glad to know you and be friends with you. thanks agian. hoping that you and your family are all happy.

    aliciagall commented on house

    11-11-2009

    It reads like a dream. We don't always find comfort in our homes but we should definitely thank God if we can find comfort within ourselves.

    Singing

    11/11/2009

    yes, you are right Dear. Thank you for these kind words.

    bforibus commented on house

    11-05-2009

    wow. this is beautiful. the short passages of thoughts spoke volumes. great job.

    Singing

    11/05/2009

    Thank you very much, Robert, i hoping i can write more better in the future.

    BigDaddyCash commented on house

    11-05-2009

    Beautiful thought why not add another cadenza and make it a home. As for me, I admire my house but I truly love my home. I shadowed my home with a magnificent weeping willow and surrounded it with cascades of beautiful flowers. I’m a slave in my house but I’m a king in my home. You have great talents to share with the world spread your arms and fly like an eagle. LOL, BDC

    Singing

    11/05/2009

    Thank you Cash. you are so kind and thank you very much for your encouragement. I will try next time. I am not so good at English poem

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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