House Of Rain

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    House Of Rain

    One of the nights
    before the rainy days
    I was looking out
    through the windows,
    I saw, somany
    winged termites
    flying out within 
    the holes of earth
    I looked them like
    my dreams.
    parents set fire
    to avoid tnem,
    I would not say them
    my dreams are in it ! 

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    koolmom0 commented on House Of Rain

    11-16-2009

    Those termites can be pesky little things, even in our dreams. You captured the image well. Koolmom
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    Necy commented on House Of Rain

    11-06-2009

    Yes, imagination ! you've used this ability in a practical and creative way. Please do write more Mr. Raghunath .
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    bforibus commented on House Of Rain

    11-06-2009

    a few nisorganized words, but the emotion and curiosity was pure and vivid. excellent job on that, the visuals.
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    Paolo commented on House Of Rain

    07-21-2009

    We who do not speak English as our language struggle at times with the subtleties of it. There are some tense issues with this poem an some spelling errors but on the whole I like that you have drawn a circle around and event that you use as metaphor.
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    jademelissa74 commented on House Of Rain

    07-18-2009

    Awesome methaporic content! I like the passion that you displayed. Great job! .
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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