Him

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    Him

    He was supposed to be my everyting
    But then he took everyting i had
    He took my heart and smashed it to pieces
    He took my love and threw it away
    Like none of it meant anything to him, like i didnt mean anything to him
    Like the promises he made me where nothing but words
    He left me alone to wonder why, he left me alone to cry

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    rossmangeles commented on Him

    07-05-2009

    Be glad that there is over a billion male species on earth and you just need some few to select from those who will put forward proposals of love for you. You will not only love once in your life. Love your self and look around. Be happy! This is a nice write.
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    sylvesterd commented on Him

    05-26-2009

    At 16, you will love a thousand times before the days are through. But remember one thing, he is no good for you. Don't let anyone tell you, that you don't mean a thing. Cause one day you will find the man of your dreams.
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    jenn1961

    05/27/2009

    thanx

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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