HER EYES

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This poem was inspired by a good friend of mine.  He came to me with his thoughts, and asked that I create a poetic piece based on his feelings. Thank you for the oppurtunity and allowing me to write for you. The pleasure was all mine. So please enjoy "Her Eyes", the day that he met his Soulmate!

HER EYES

" HER EYES"

I'VE SEEN HER BEFORE MANY TIMES ON DIFFERENT OCCASIONS,
BUT ON THIS DAY FOR WHATEVER REASON I WAS ATTTRACTED TO HER SOPHISTICATION


THE ESSENCE OF HER SIMPLICITY CAUGHT ME BY SURPRISE
AS A REVELATION WAS UNVEILED WHEN I LOOKED INTO HER EYES


IT IS SAID THAT THE EYES ARE THE WINDOWS TO OUR SOUL,
AND WHEN I GAZED THROUGH HER WINDOWS ALL OF HER SINCERITY WAS EXPOSED


I SAW HER NATURAL ESSENCE, AND HER COMPASSION APPEALED TO ME,
A SOFT DELICATE FLOWER SCENTED WITH ALLURING SENSUALITY


A FLAWLESS IMAGE OF AN ANGEL DRAPED IN PASSION AND TRANQUILITY,
I STOOD THERE ASTOUND, AS I EXPERIENCED MY FIRST EPHIPHANY


IN HER PRESENCE I'M AT PEACE, AND HER EYES THEY COMFORT ME,
IS HER SOUL SPEAKING TO MINE, MY GOD WHAT ARE YOU SHOWING  ME?


WHAT I'M FEELING IS UNDESCRIBABLE, I WANT HER IN MY LIFE I CAN'T WAIT,
TODAY MY LIFE HAS CHANGED, FOR I HAVE MET MY SOULMATE........



WRITTEN BY SAMARIA DESHON

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klassik commented on HER EYES

01-04-2014

very nice... like .

kingdonz214 commented on HER EYES

08-28-2010

REALL GOOD.............................................................

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Samaria14’s Poems (7)

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LOVE 4
HER EYES 3
A ROSE FOR YOU 4
IF 3
ABANDONED MOMENTS 1
DESPAIR 2
WITHIN ME 2