hell

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hell

i consider that death had one wish
a wish 2 be real
to touch any human being without bringing death
he cried for days and days
yes that is true
death had feelings too
so consider this
satan came out one day
asked death to bring him a friend
death chosed a milk maiden and asked to come spend some time with him

it happened and death was cool
satan agreed if something should happened death will have it's wish
here's the wish the truth death reconsidered its reason and would not partake in it
being human sucks being death is cool!

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dherrington commented on hell

02-06-2009

lots of potential...feels like ur trying harder to shock people rather then express urself tho.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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