Heaven's Door

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    Heaven's Door

     

    　

    　

    Heaven's Door

     

    There were clouds of mist

    doves white as snow

    it was a place of elegance

    anyone

    would want

    to go

     

    soft music

    of violin sounds

    filled the room

    all around

    it was

    knock,knock knock

    at heaven's door

     

    angels of kindness

    gentle and sweet

    were there

    with open

    arms to greet

    Mother

    + when she stepped in

    knock knock knock

    at Heaven's Door.

     

    　

    　

    　

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    gogant commented on Heaven's Door

    01-13-2011

    This is a finely tuned bit of poetry.......it has love, happiness, and a hint of sadness. I don't understand these last 3 lines, though.........................................................gogant + when she stepped in knock knock knock at Heaven's Door.
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    tsgirl

    01/14/2011

    Hi gogant, thanks for the compliment, to your not understanding the last 3 lines, it's a visual that I had as my Mother step up into to heaven and knocked at heaven's door, and the door opened (smile)

    gogant

    01/14/2011

    So, that was the reason for the + sign.....

    tsgirl

    01/14/2011

    You know gogant, It is so interesting to me that you notice the + sign, it was surprising to me after I finish the poem, and proof read it I noticed it was there without my knowledge of putting it there, by it being a cross sign I decided to leave it there, it shows that this poem was given to me by the grace of God, believe me when I tell you this, you are the first person to have pointed that out, feel special.(smile)

    rmlee commented on Heaven's Door

    11-03-2009

    enter this one In the contest,I really,really like.
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    Hadizab commented on Heaven's Door

    09-20-2009

    Lovely. It actualy brought tears to my eyes. my condolances for your Mother.
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    tsgirl

    09/20/2009

    Thank you so much for your nice comment, you can also go to www.lulu.com/joy4luv and review the books, again thank you and may God Bless 1 luv

    wheelsal commented on Heaven's Door

    08-25-2009

    I see heaven through your words. Nice write. Sally
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    Clementinewoods commented on Heaven's Door

    08-24-2009

    This is a beautiful piece of work!!! I just love your description of heaven, upon one’s entering. Thanks for sharing and be blessed!!!
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    tsgirl

    08/31/2009

    thank you clementinewoods for the comment, I'm sorry to have taken so long to get back to you, did I mention my book at www.lulu.com/joy4luv you are so very welcome to view it,and let me know what you think, thank you in advance. 1 luv

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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