heartache and pain

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    • poohbear
    • @ home waitin 2 fall asleep got sum thoughts nd 2 write em down

    heartache and pain

    whateva happen to the love
    we once shared
    those feelings we had that showed
    everyone that we cared
    as i watched the sunset i wonder about u
    and wut use 2 be me
    cant get those memories out of my head makes
    me wonder who is she
    Question: is she good 2 u?
    does she do u better then i do?
    do u love her i mean really love her?
    does she know all your secrets?
    i cant bear 2 hear the answers my heart
    can't take the pain
    i remember all the times we spent hugging and laughing
    this was before the lies and games
    it's so hard 2 hate sumone especially sumone u onced loved
    it brings tears to my eyes
    hearing sum1 else call u baby, my baby is the one she love
    i guess in due time i'll get over you
    but i may not ever stop bein in love with you
    whats a girl 2 do i guess i'll 4ever
    be hopelss without u



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    loveangel4life commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    tell it girl! perfectly said. The feeling sucks, but we live and learn and later find an even greater happiness :)

    whytecherries25 commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    This poem is so deep i love it i can relate to it.

    PunoAngulus commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    Powerful. Strong with an emotional punch to the gut. Memories play in my own mind. This reminds me of what my x-wife did to me after she cheated on me and tried to destroy me in every way and she almost did it too. Beautiful straight forward.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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