heartache and pain

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    • poohbear
    • @ home waitin 2 fall asleep got sum thoughts nd 2 write em down

    heartache and pain

    whateva happen to the love
    we once shared
    those feelings we had that showed
    everyone that we cared
    as i watched the sunset i wonder about u
    and wut use 2 be me
    cant get those memories out of my head makes
    me wonder who is she
    Question: is she good 2 u?
    does she do u better then i do?
    do u love her i mean really love her?
    does she know all your secrets?
    i cant bear 2 hear the answers my heart
    can't take the pain
    i remember all the times we spent hugging and laughing
    this was before the lies and games
    it's so hard 2 hate sumone especially sumone u onced loved
    it brings tears to my eyes
    hearing sum1 else call u baby, my baby is the one she love
    i guess in due time i'll get over you
    but i may not ever stop bein in love with you
    whats a girl 2 do i guess i'll 4ever
    be hopelss without u



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    loveangel4life commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    tell it girl! perfectly said. The feeling sucks, but we live and learn and later find an even greater happiness :)

    whytecherries25 commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    This poem is so deep i love it i can relate to it.

    PunoAngulus commented on heartache and pain

    02-02-2009

    Powerful. Strong with an emotional punch to the gut. Memories play in my own mind. This reminds me of what my x-wife did to me after she cheated on me and tried to destroy me in every way and she almost did it too. Beautiful straight forward.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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