Heartache

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    Heartache

    The pain, misery, deceit, and disbelief for which I bare this heartache. The feeling of being alone and trying to make this relationship work when you dont even feel the same as I. Sadness fills my core as if I'm not important to you but yet I try to make us work; is it me, is it you, this feeling is it true, me and you, or false belief I cant believe this it must not be me. But I digress despite the love I have for you, you just dont understand this must be a mistake. The reason why I write to you because I feel this relationship is my heartache.

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    Savant commented on Heartache

    10-28-2009

    Heartache is inevitable. Great stuff. I've checked out a few of your pieces and you got some skill. Keep it up. You got a lot of passion in your work. I got one called Love, you should check it out.

    whit866 commented on Heartache

    09-03-2009

    great job!!!! this is excellent, bravo young bro.WMS

    TrueLove89 commented on Heartache

    12-09-2008

    I totally feel you in this poem. Keep it up,i look foward to reading more from you.

    JazzyChic commented on Heartache

    11-24-2008

    Oh my...that is tight...especially from such a young spirit...i likesssss alot!! Keep it up!

    charliedue commented on Heartache

    11-24-2008

    Thanks for the comment on my page. this poem is very relatable... Thanks for sharing! keep on sharing..plz

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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