Heart explodes

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    Heart explodes
    When mountains crumble to the sea
    There will still be you and me
    I have been alone with you inside my mind
    And in my dreams I have kissed your lips a thousand times
    The taste of love is sweet
    When hearts like ours meet
    I love the way your heart beats whenever i hold you close
    Nobody knows
    How my heart explodes

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    hx commented on Heart explodes

    02-13-2009

    I'm a big fan of brevity, so this piece appeals to me. Everything after the first 2 lines are very well written. The first 2 lines, unfortunately, are almost exactly lifted from a Led Zeppelin song called "Thank You." Hopefully that wasn't intentional.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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