Heart-Broken

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    • sade08
    • is have more poems to come but in the meantime could you please take time out to read the ones i do have posted and leave a comment to let me know wat you think about them .....thanks

    Heart-Broken

     -Right now Im left alone with no one to talk to
    -Gave you all of my trust and love but look what you left me to do
    -To do nothing but feel heart-broken and cry it all away
    -Yes, my heart is broken but i can not cry everyday
    -I thought you and I would last forever but I guess I my thoughts were wrong
    -I can not constantly beg u or expect you to come back
    -But I know I can stau strong
    -Im moving on with my life and i hope to find someone better
    -Someone who can satisfy me and deal with my pleasure

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    Romano commented on Heart-Broken

    06-23-2009

    I feel all your pain and frustration, yet I have one called "heart Broken" as well, if you get a chance read it and tell me what you think.........it was written for a young lady who shard with me her feelings about a guy she was pregnant from and i felt her pain and i myself cried because of heartless humans and playing with emotions.......
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