he said no

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  • Friendship

    he said no

     i look in the mirror
    asking myself
    what did i do
    to derserve a no

    he said no
    i just want to be friends
    nothing more
    nothing less

    i dont let him see the pain
    i dont let him see the hurt

    he said no
    i just want to be friends
    nothing more
    nothing less

    finally i get the nervs to ask
    why just plain old no
    he said i dont want to lose you
    now that we are god friends

    he said no
    i just want to be friends
    nothing more
    nothing less

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    nhorlandi commented on he said no

    02-04-2010

    mirror, mirror who's the fairest... I'm pretty sure he will say you are. Good write but be very careful with your spellings.
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    Rhymer commented on he said no

    12-24-2009

    Very creative and imaginative write, the flow was good. 10 from me.
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    StefanieStammer

    12/25/2009

    thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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