HAVE YOU EVER

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    HAVE YOU EVER

    Have you ever been in love
    With some one that you can never have
    Have you ever found yourself thinking about them
    Every second of every minute of every hour
    And do you know how much it hurts
    To think and know that they can never be yours
    What is even worse
    Is that you both feel the same
    When you are down,
    They feel that you are down
    And when they are down,
    You feel it in your bones
    Sometimes all you need to hear is their voice
    For your heart to be at peace
    They make you smile, they make you laugh
    Then you find yourself wishing for something more
    But then that is all it can ever be,
    A wish
    And you find yourself thinking that
    The world is a very cruel place
    And you want to throw a tantrum
    To stomp your feet down
    And cry out in frustration
    You want to lash out at everyone
    Then you try and calm yourself
    Tell yourself that everything’s going to be alright
    But you find it is all a waste of time
    Coz deep in your heart you know for sure
    That these feelings are not about to disappear

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    Qualin commented on HAVE YOU EVER

    07-19-2009

    ................................................yep!...................................................... Qualin

    lizmwiks

    08/10/2009

    Thank you for your comments

    Arutee4ever commented on HAVE YOU EVER

    06-22-2009

    The author has handled the theme very well and achieved the poem's goal of creating emotions of love or shooting Cupid's arrow across national borders. I have now mentally fallen in love with someone I cannot have because she is in Nairobi (Kenya) and I am in Port Harcourt (Nigeria). Nice poem!

    lizmwiks

    08/10/2009

    Thank you for your comments.

    JadedJezzabel commented on HAVE YOU EVER

    03-30-2009

    i like this...nice flow..and a topic that everyone can relate to. great example of prose

    lizmwiks

    08/10/2009

    Thank you for your comments

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    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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