Happy M.L.K. Day

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This poem was written in tribute to Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. His belief that all men and women are created equal is an encouraging message and his peaceful way of getting his message across to the world has made his place in history very valuable.

Happy M.L.K. Day

In my own way,
What can I say,
In memory of;
A man so loved ...

A godly man,
With a pure heart,
Who one day dared;
To prove he cared.

He gave his all,
Hearing God's call.
He changed the world;
For young and old.

Today we say,
In peaceful ways,
We all are free;
No doubt we see.
 
So, boys and girls,
In this vast world,
Each day lets show;
The love we know.

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RHPeat commented on Happy M.L.K. Day

01-31-2010

Nice poem about Martin. You might want to say; (He changed the world/ for young and old.) It would read smoother. A poet friend// RH Peat

Sunwryter

01/31/2010

Thank you immensely!!! Yes, your suggestion gave it FLIGHT. You put fresh oxygen into my faulty lung :). You are indeed this poet's friend. (((Big Hug)))

RHPeat

02/01/2010

You are quite welcome Sunwryter. Feel free to make any kind of comment you wish on any of my poems. I'm quite open any form of constructive criticism. I welcome it. It's the only way to keep expanding the consciousness of any poem. a poet friend// RH Peat

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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