Haiku Poem

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    Haiku Poem

     Nothings meant to last forever, not this world
    or its sunny weather.
    Not these words or the voice from witch they gather.

    Nothings meant to last forever, not this world
    or its sunny weather.
    Not my hopes my dreams or any of these,
    not my life my thought or memories.

    No nothings meant to last forever not this world
    or its sunny weather.
    But while it last I’ll live forever relished in a
    simple shower.

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    kkirkwood commented on Haiku Poem

    05-22-2013

    very good imagery, may I suggest you revise your title. I like the line relished in a simple shower.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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