Gratefl Billy

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Gratefl Billy

Billy yelled for pain hoping that someone would have heard him
but everyone who looked his way just turned around and despised him
No one wanted to know why he was where he was at,
they just stared at his dirty clothes, his tousled hair and that was their fact

The streets comforted him at nights and sheltered him from the cold
From he was a little boy that was all he had, and now he had grown old
At forty-three he wished for a better life and for just a morsel of bread
but most of all he wished for a family and a bed to lay his head 

With Further thought and three more years he closed his eyes and came to understand
That God had blessed him with so much things and for that he was very glad
He had clothes, food, life and a place to crash
from dust 'til dawn
but most of all he had something to eat each day because God provided someone else's trash.

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chinny commented on Gratefl Billy

09-23-2009

Girl, this poem has truely been an inspiration and it has taught me to be more grateful for the finer things in life, because when we think that we are the worse then there is always someone worst than us!! Keep doing the best that you can because only your best is good enough!!

Worthless commented on Gratefl Billy

09-22-2009

Being homeless sucks no matter where you are! God is here but you wonder sometimes why you're always living in fear of where your going to go, where to take a shower, who's really in power, and how your going to get there. It's every second of wondering what's going to happen next. No more day to day thinking things will be O.k., It gets worse and your living the worlds worst curse! Well written...

staceyoyo commented on Gratefl Billy

09-22-2009

i was just told to read ur poem but i didnt regret it.. hope u win talk to u soon girl

manager commented on Gratefl Billy

09-22-2009

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Aioka

02/26/2016

After 7 years, I doubt that you will see this message. I really appreciate this comment. It made my day. Who ever you are, Thank you.

manager commented on Gratefl Billy

09-22-2009

hey sexyaiokaja wats up girl i finally got the chance to read one of ur poems and finally comment... i love it

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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