Goodbye

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    • Joey999
    • Definitely gonna leave this... goodbye everyone.

    Goodbye
    I am gone.
    I'm so far gone you wouldn't even know
    I'm so far gone you could never hear me scream
    So far gone you wouldn't hear a thing.
    I'm so far gone drowning in quick sand.
    So far gone there is no helping hand.
    I'm too far gone you can't help me.
    So far gone I tried, begged on one knee.
    I'm in so deep to deep for you to notice, 
    to deep for you to care I'm gone now nothings left. 
     it was never your fault. 
    The depression cut me
    to deep for you see to deep for you too feel.
    The Pain is bigger then me, 
    I tried to fight.
    I'm just gone now.
    I'm sorry...
    I am gone.
    I'm so far gone you wouldn't even know
    I'm so far gone you could never hear me scream
    So far gone you wouldn't hear a thing.
    I'm so far gone drowning in quick sand.
    So far gone there is no helping hand.
    I'm too far gone you can't help me.
    So far gone I tried, begged on one knee.
    I'm in so deep to deep for you to notice, 
    to deep for you to care I'm gone now nothings left. 
     it was never your fault. 
    The depression cut me
    to deep for you see to deep for you too feel.
    The Pain is bigger then me, 
    I tried to fight.
    I'm just gone now.
    I'm sorry...

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    sk8erpoet commented on Goodbye

    10-16-2012

    Amazing poem...but I sure hope it's not for real. You're stronger than that bro, I know it....-sk8
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    Joey999

    10/17/2012

    I know i am. You know me so well sis,it's just that some times i just want to give up but i never give up at the end haha.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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